@RobertCole on Bluesky

First ever epiphany in poems

Haiku-ish possibilities:

Driving from here to there

Imposing pine tree shadows projected on a giant wall

Eternity erupts!

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Driving through the golden evening

Imposing pine tree shadows project on a giant wall

A moment transforms into infinity.

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Five lines:

Driving the golden evening

from here to there

Imposing pine tree shadows

projected on a giant wall

Eternity erupts!

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More possibilities:

Golden light of the setting sun

Imposing pine tree shadows on a giant wall.

Eternity erupts!

A golden evening

Pine tree shadows on a giant wall.

Eternity erupts!

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Final:

Golden light of the setting sun

Pine tree shadows on the giant wall

Eternity erupts!

@thebobcolecpa on Bluesky